Lesson 288
Parts of the Sentence - Sentence Variety
Having learned about phrases and clauses, let's now use the following phrases
and clauses to give variety to our writing: participial phrases, adverb clauses,
adjective clauses, compound sentences or verbs.
First identify which of the above ways is used in the sentence, and then
rewrite it using the three other ways identifying each of the methods used.
Example: Having finished my lessons, I sat back and gloried in my effort. =
participial phrase
You must rewrite it using an adverb clause, adjective clause, and either a
compound sentence or a simple sentence with compound verbs.
I finished my lessons, sat back, and gloried in my effort. = compound verbs
After I had finished my lessons, I sat back and gloried in my effort. = adverb
clause
I who had finished my lessons sat back and gloried in my effort. = adjective
clause
Instructions: Identify the written sentence and rewrite it the other three ways.
1. The engineer knew the train was on time, leaned against the side, and
sighed with relief.
2. Hoping to have the seating in place by evening, the committee for the
Olympics hurriedly set up bleachers along the main road.
3. Mark took a quick, refreshing swim in the mountain lake before he returned
to the cabin for breakfast.
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Answers:
1. compound verbs
Knowing the train was on time, the engineer leaned against the side and
sighed with relief. = participial phrase
The engineer that knew the train was on time leaned against the side and
sighed with relief. = adjective clause
When the engineer leaned against the side and sighed with relief, he knew the
train was on time. = adverb clause
2. participial phrase
The committee for the Olympics hoped to have the seating in place by evening
and hurriedly set up bleachers along the main road. = compound verb
The committee for the Olympics that hoped to have the seating in place by
evening hurriedly set up bleachers along the main road. = adjective clause
Because they hoped to have the seating in place by evening, the committee for
the Olympics hurriedly set up bleachers along the main road. = adverb clause
3. adverb clause
Having taken a quick, refreshing swim in the mountain lake, Mark returned to
the cabin for breakfast. = participial phrase
Mark who had taken a quick, refreshing swim in the mountain lake returned to
the cabin for breakfast. = adjective clause
Mark took a quick, refreshing swim in the mountain lake and returned to the
cabin for breakfast. = compound verbs
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